A question
In all my perdition one question which refused to appear in my soliloquy was Why Me? Alternatively, those two words signify that sublime threshold for breakdown of human perseverance. Amidst such a backdrop, I decided to raise a ditty in honor of all innocent souls who ask this profound question, one being an inchoate reader
Why me
Blessing on thee
Who fail to see
It is meant to be
Why me
Peace to thee
Who fail to see
It is fate's decree
Why me
Sorry for thee
Who fail to see
A lock without its key
Why me
Blessing on thee
Who fail to see
It is meant to be
Why me
Peace to thee
Who fail to see
It is fate's decree
Why me
Sorry for thee
Who fail to see
A lock without its key
11 comments
:) i could not help but smile....with due respect to the profoundness of the ditty, i still find it funny!!
and who's the "inchoate reader"??? has she/he been leaving comments behind???? if no, why not??? does she/he visit our blogs too?? will we get a chance to make an acquaintance with her/him (so what if we cant churn out ditties)????? I wanna KNOW!!!! :DDD
Many wannabe poets fall into this trap of making every line rhyme. In order to write good poetry one must break from this mould and write sentences which are punctuated at the right place.
Got it?
I loved it...!
Moi, 666: Whats 'inchoate'?? Pls use regular english on ur blogs!!
lol @ Kanishka's 2 cents of poetic advice :))
"Why me?" To get the answer ask your inchoate reader..that is my piece of advice instead of getting suffocated with the question itself.
lol @ Kanishka's words of wisdom!!!
Radha: like i use such words on my post!!!! :) 666 anyways inhabits an "irregular" universe!!! :)
Why Me
Advice to thee
HE wants you to see
Be all you can be!
-Fatalists rock!
You are "some " amazing person!!
I am at loss of words to express my awe the ease with which you weave the words!
I think I an ready to write one on "why me" as well!
cool stuff on a very uncool phenomena!
Many Many happy returns of the day Manya...Have a bash...I know you dont celebrate..but be happy.
I love the ditties!!!!!!!
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